ネイティブの先生の添削を受けることで自分の間違いを確認でき、

よりより表現を教えてもらうことで

「なるほど、こう書くとより格調高くなる」などが学べます。

添削された英文はくり返し音読するよう推奨されています。

Mさんの英文は、

あまり大きな間違いがなく、またシンプルですが表現がいいですね。

仮定法も正しく使われています。

※赤は文法的な直しで、緑字はよりよい表現としての添削です。

横浜井土ヶ谷校　Mさん　（高１時）

トピック　’Basic Income’

I’m in favor of basic income. If basic income were introduced in Japan, people who cannot work or who are poor could live a steady life.

However, basic income has a disadvantage. If it were introduced, many people who work hard every day would lose sight of the meaning of working. And the number of people who quit their jobs would increase.

In the end, the Japanese economy would not be able to revitalize.

中３でこのような英文が書けるのは、かなりレベルが高いですね。

元の英文と、添削文の両方を掲載しております。

ネイティブの先生は、

赤字は間違っているので直し、

緑字はよりよい表現に、という形で添削されています。

下北沢校　Iさん　（中３時）

I do not think with the opinion that all people should be able to enter museums for free. There are two reasons for my view.

First, it is difficult to run a museum. If all of people can enter museums for free, museums get any money. It is hard to collect money to maintain the museum and pay salary for employees. Also, it is not easy to exhibit famous and valuable exhibitions.

Second, it increases a number of customers who are not interested in the museum and do not have moral. It makes angry people who enjoy the museum quietly.

In conclusion, entering museums for free is bad effect for both of museums and customers, so I should not be able to that.

（以下が添削された英文です）

I do not agree with the opinion that all people should be able to enter museums for free. There are two reasons for my view.

First, it is difficult to run a museum. If everyone can enter museums for free, museums won’t be able to earn any money. It will be hard to collect enough money to maintain the museum and pay the salaries of the employees. Also, it will not be easy to put on famous and valuable exhibitions.

Second, it will increase the number of customers who are not interested in the museum and do not behave properly. It will anger people who just want to enjoy the museum quietly.

In conclusion, entering museums for free will have a bad effect on both museums and their customers, so people should not be able to get in for free.