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この夏、学校や塾では教えてくれない

“英文法のホントの基礎”を伝授！

・英語を基礎のキソからていねいに教えてほしい！

・文法がわからなくなってしまった…

・いつも英語は丸暗記で乗り切っていてつらい…

・がんばっているのに英語の成績が上がらない…

そんな悩みを抱える皆さんに、英語学習のツボを知り尽くしたベテラン講師が、学校や塾では教えてくれない“英文法のホントの基礎”を個別に指導。

英語がわからなくなってしまった方や、新学期に向けて英文法の基礎をしっかり固めておきたい方にピッタリです！

この夏休み、英語学習の見通しがパッと明るくなるターニングポイントにしよう！

■対象学年

中学生、高校生　

※小学５～６年生もご相談可能です。その旨備考欄にお書きください。

■内容

英文法の根本である品詞とその働きおよび文型を中心に指導します。また、最大２名までのクラスですので、生徒さんのレベルやつまずきの原因を講師が見極めたうえで他に必要な事項についても指導を行います。

中学生

（１）低学年または苦手な生徒さん

品詞とSV・一般動詞・Be動詞の肯定・疑問・否定　不定詞・動名詞　

（２）高学年または得意な生徒さん

品詞とSV・不定詞・動名詞・分詞・関係代名詞

高校生

英語の文構造の根本である品詞と５文型を押さえたのち、不定詞・動名詞・分詞・関係代名詞（that節の見分け）などの文構造理解にとって重要な文法項目を扱います。

■形式

zoomオンライン授業

少人数クラス内個別指導（１クラス最大２名）　

■日程

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今後、コースが追加されることがあります。New！と表示されます。

●完全個別でご自身のスケジュールに合わせて日程を組みたい方もご相談可能です。

その旨、備考欄にお書きください。

●受講をご希望の小学5～6年生もご相談可能です。備考欄にお書きください。

• ■時間

１名クラス60分、２名クラス90分

■料金

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小学生 ：13,200円(税込）

※完全個別の場合　　

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ご記入いただき、お申し込みください。

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日本人のワークライフバランス、

生徒のみなさんが仕事に就くときにはよりよい状況になっていることでしょう。

そして女性管理職が増えることも期待ですね。

そういう内容に切り込んだ英作文です。

日本人の勤勉さに企業はつけこんでいる、、、といった指摘も。

なかなか難しい内容を英語にすることに挑戦していますね。

※赤字が文法的な訂正、緑字はよりよい表現という意味での添削です

武蔵小杉校　泉川紗衣さん　（高３時）

In my opinion, companies need to improve the way they treat their workers. There are two problems which we need to solve.

Firstly, the Japanese work-life balance is terrible compared to other countries. Japanese people tend to spend more of their time working than they do relaxing at home or enjoying themselves elsewhere. I think it is because of the specific character of the Japanese. Most Japanese companies are dependent on their diligent character.

Secondly, there is a big difference between the way they treat men and women. Companies usually hire people who can work for a long time in the future. Men can keep working because most of them have the responsibility to provide for their families, while only women can bear babies, so they need to take time off to raise their children for a while. This is one of the reasons for the gap.

Therefore, companies should think again about how they treat their workers.

（提出英文）

In my opinion, companies need to improve the way they treat their workers. There are two problems which we need to solve.

Firstly, Japanese work-life balance is more terrible than that of another countries. Japanese people tend to spend their time on working more than do on being relaxed at home or on playing somewhere. I think it is because of Japanese specific character. Most Japanese companies are dependent on their diligent character.

Secondly, there is a big difference between male and female. Companies usually hire people who can work for a long time in the future. Male can keep working because most of them have responsibilities to provide for their family, while female only can have bear their babies, so they need to take a rest to raise their children for a while. It is one reason causes this gap.

Therefore, companies should think again about treatments of workers.

高２生ですが、

ちゃんとした構文を使い、修飾関係も複雑な英文が書けていますね。

受動態もうまく使えていると思います。

（※赤字が文法的な訂正、緑字がよりよい表現という意味での添削です）

南加瀬校　　高橋　理沙さん　（高２時）

I think that people should stop using goods that are made from animals. There are two reasons for this.

First, the trafficking of animal materials is a big problem and it could cause endangered species to die out. Today, materials from endangered animals or goods made from them are bought as expensive products and crimes involving the illegal trading of them are carried out all over the world. If people stopped buying animal materials and products, such trades would decrease and we could protect endangered species.

Second, animals have the right to live and die in nature. They should live in a natural ecosystem, so people should not use them just out of selfishness and disregard animals’ rights.

For these reasons, it is clear that people should stop using goods that are made from animals.

Wincoｍという、ネイティブのロジャー先生が添削してくれる

ウィングローブの添削サービス　’Wincom’。

国立大学の受験前には、受験生たちがかなり利用しています。

尾木さんもその一人でした。

今年の春、見事、国立大学に合格しています。

さすがに文法的ミスは少ないです。

（※以下、赤字は文法的に直すべき箇所、緑字はよりよい表現としての添削です）

勝どき校　　尾木　芯輔さん　（高３時）

I think that old people should live with their families.　Such a lifestyle has many benefits. I will explain the two main reasons for this.

First, it is hard for old people to live by themselves. Generally speaking, the older we get, the weaker our fundamental living capacity becomes. Given this fact, life becomes too dangerous for old people who don’t live with their families.

Second, it is good not only for old people but also for children. If there are a grandfather and a grandmother in the family,　they can play with their grandchildren.　Children will feel that it is fun and it will be good exercise for them.

For these reasons, I think that old people should live with their families.

ネイティブの先生の添削を受けることで自分の間違いを確認でき、

よりより表現を教えてもらうことで

「なるほど、こう書くとより格調高くなる」などが学べます。

添削された英文はくり返し音読するよう推奨されています。

Mさんの英文は、

あまり大きな間違いがなく、またシンプルですが表現がいいですね。

仮定法も正しく使われています。

※赤は文法的な直しで、緑字はよりよい表現としての添削です。

横浜井土ヶ谷校　Mさん　（高１時）

トピック　’Basic Income’

I’m in favor of basic income. If basic income were introduced in Japan, people who cannot work or who are poor could live a steady life.

However, basic income has a disadvantage. If it were introduced, many people who work hard every day would lose sight of the meaning of working. And the number of people who quit their jobs would increase.

In the end, the Japanese economy would not be able to revitalize.

中３でこのような英文が書けるのは、かなりレベルが高いですね。

元の英文と、添削文の両方を掲載しております。

ネイティブの先生は、

赤字は間違っているので直し、

緑字はよりよい表現に、という形で添削されています。

下北沢校　Iさん　（中３時）

I do not think with the opinion that all people should be able to enter museums for free. There are two reasons for my view.

First, it is difficult to run a museum. If all of people can enter museums for free, museums get any money. It is hard to collect money to maintain the museum and pay salary for employees. Also, it is not easy to exhibit famous and valuable exhibitions.

Second, it increases a number of customers who are not interested in the museum and do not have moral. It makes angry people who enjoy the museum quietly.

In conclusion, entering museums for free is bad effect for both of museums and customers, so I should not be able to that.

（以下が添削された英文です）

I do not agree with the opinion that all people should be able to enter museums for free. There are two reasons for my view.

First, it is difficult to run a museum. If everyone can enter museums for free, museums won’t be able to earn any money. It will be hard to collect enough money to maintain the museum and pay the salaries of the employees. Also, it will not be easy to put on famous and valuable exhibitions.

Second, it will increase the number of customers who are not interested in the museum and do not behave properly. It will anger people who just want to enjoy the museum quietly.

In conclusion, entering museums for free will have a bad effect on both museums and their customers, so people should not be able to get in for free.

英作文力は、一朝一夕につくものではないですね。

「英借文」とも言いますが、

文法力も磨いて、正しい文法を使えるようにすること、

語彙力・表現力をアップして、場面に合うものを選べるようにする、

ということが必要ですね。

高１でこの英文が書けるのは立派です。

高い英語力を培っている印象です。

＊北戸田校　津久井　陽仁さん　（高１時）　　

※下線部や (  )は添削が入った部分です

トピック

Should companies in Japan take action to reduce plastic waste?

I think companies in Japan should take action to reduce plastic waste. I have two opinions.

First of all, reducing plastic waste is very important for us to improve environment. Recently, marine pollution (ここにcaused必要）by floating plastic waste become (has becomeがベター）a crucial problem. The plastic waste affects many marine creatures. There are companies that take action for (→are taking action to resolve) the problem. For example, McDonalds used to use plastic straws. But now, it uses straws made from paper. Starbucks also do (→has also made) this change. Because of the change, each company is able to reduce plastic waste. They help environment get better. Japanese companies should imitate these moves.

Second, the companies are able to improve (→reduce) excess packaging. Extra packaging is unnecessary. By changing (ここにto必要） moderate packaging, they could reduce plastic waste.

In conclusion, Japanese companies should take action to reduce plastic waste.

ウィングローブでは、英検の作文や、大学受験の作文などを

添削してくれるサービスを行っております。

くり返し利用することでレベルが上がっていきます。

浦和岸町校　Tさん（高２時）　　※若干添削修正しております。

I disagree that classmates and partners should communicate with each other face to face to finish the project better than by sending e-mails. There are two points for my opinion to make in this connection.

First, it is now possible to get in touch with each other more easily because the Internet has made progress recently. Almost everyone has their own smartphone or tablet. These enable people to communicate with each other without any cost.

Second, people can check the contents whenever they like. Every person has their own lifestyle. Also, when they must contact people who live in foreign countries, by sending e-mails, they do not have to worry about their partner’s schedule so much.

For these reasons, I disagree that classmates and partners should communicate with each other face to face to finish the project better than by sending e-mails.

ウィングローブ英語塾では、生徒の英作文をネイティブのスタッフが添削してくれるというサービスを行っております。

高校生の作文で、よく書けているものをスタッフが選んでくれましたので

ご紹介いたします。

このようにちゃんと意見が英語で言えるのは、将来にも役立ちますね。

横浜井土ヶ谷校　Tさんの作文（高１時）

Time vs Money、永遠の課題ですね。

配分をパーセンテージで表しているところが具体的でした。

※以下で（→）とあるのは、よりよい表現に添削するとこうですよ、という意味で添削されたものです。

Time vs Money

I would rather earn less money by working a little more (→shorter hours）than earn more money by working much time (→longer hours）
To begin with, to have fun using much money (→by spending a lot of money) is one thing; to play (→entertain yourself）without money is another.
If you have little time to play (for entertainment), you can’t use your money. Such a life means that you live to work. On the other hand, even if you can’t afford to spend money, you can enjoy doing something with your friends or by yourself, because you have time.
Nowadays, there are many entertainments that make you excited. Systems such as the Internet are very reasonable or even free. I don’t think that we need money to just enjoy our lives. The most important role of money is to let us live. Of course, to have much money is wonderful. However I feel time is more important than money.
When I get older, I would like to work at a company that gives me 60% of time and 40 % of money.

ウィングローブ英語塾では
生徒が書いた英作文をネイティブの先生が添削してくれるというサービスを行っております。

その中での優秀作文をご紹介いたします。

（多少、添削しています）

渋谷校　長嶺　沙羅さん（高３時）

トピック　In the future, science may make it possible for people to live healthy life to the age of 150.
What would be the advantages and disadvantages of living longer?

I think that if we could live longer than now, we could spend more time with our family and friends, and we could also make more money with them. However, living longer has not only advantages but also disadvantages,  because it causes many problems. For example, younger will be taxed more for elderly people’s pensions. And we will need more money to stay healthy.

Then, the gap between poor and rich will determine whether we can or can not live longer. I think that it is very cruel. From those things, I think that living longer has advantages and disadvantages, and both thing are very important.