大学受験、高校受験のウィングローブ英語塾。渋谷本部です。

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高3生のHさん(法政二高)(武蔵小杉校所属)

ウィングローブのネイティブ英文添削サービスWincomに数回申込みをして、300語、400語という長文も提出しています。

 

添削担当のロジャー先生にも「大学生以上!」と褒められた英文です。

(以下は、添削前の英文です)

 

Topic: Are there any advantages to holding Tokyo Olympic Games under the COVID 19 Pandemic?

 

Although some people say that Tokyo Olympic Games brought some problems, I believe its benefits overwhelm those problems. There are three reasons to support my opinion.

 

First, the Olympic Games encouraged foreign people to be interested in Japan. These days, the number of visitors to Japan has been decreasing under the pandemic. However, the Olympics gave us opportunity to promote Japan toward foreign people. For example, through media coverages such as TV, they could see the scenery of

Tokyo as well as the Olympic Games. Moreover, some foreign athletes were impressed with Japanese products and food sold at convenience stores, and they posted the picture of those on the social media. This also allowed people in other countries to know about Japan.

 

Second, the Olympics allows LGBTQ+ athletes to promote themselves toward the world. In fact, the number of LGBTQ athletes participating in the Tokyo Olympic Games was the largest than those of any other Olympic Games that have ever been held. Then, people all over the world were impressed with those athletes. For example, Thomas Robert Daley said that he was proud of himself as a gay man and the campion of the Olympic Games. Thus, this Olympic Games contributed to enlightening the people around the world on the gender diversity.

 

Third, Japanese people could also enjoy the Olympic Games as well as foreign people. Under the pandemic, people are forced to stay at home, and there are some people feeling lonely or suffering from depression. Nevertheless, it is also true that such people were encouraged by the Olympic athletes. For instance, teenager skateboarder, Momiji Yamamoto got the first prize, which surprised many people. Therefore, the Olympic Games had a positive effect on Japanese people too.

 

For these reasons I have stated above, I believe that there are advantages to holding the Olympic Games even under the pandemic. Furthermore, the world should fight against the pandemic by taking advantage of solidarity improved by the Olympic Games.

ウィングローブ英語塾高校生の、素晴らしい英作文紹介シリーズ第三弾となりました!

今回は、大学入試問題の作文問題について書かれたものです。

 

以下の英文は

仲田萌恵さん(高3)神大付属高校 (川崎市・南加瀬校)の英文です。

素晴らしい出来です!

(添削前の文章を載せています)

 

【問題】

Create an original news story for the headline.

1.Strange new insect species discovered in Amazon rainforest.

 

【英作文】

It is surprising for the world to find strange new insects in the Amazon rainforest. They have red eyes, which enable them to see something small that cannot be seen by other insects.

When we discovered them for the first time, we were afraid of them because they are twice as big as we are. But however frequently we disturbed them, they were silent and didn’t care us. We decided to capture one of them because we want to have them examined later.

After all, we lost sight of them without realizing it, but we were lucky to take photos of them when we found them. We know little about their look, and only these pictures prove their existence.

If you go to the Amazon rainforest, you may be able to see them.

 

ウィングローブ英語塾の高校生は、すばらしい英文を書いています。

第二弾、ご紹介します。

 

ウィングローブ英語塾では、専門のネイティブスタッフ・ロジャー先生に添削をお願いしておりますが、

 

今回は高3生の英文をご紹介します。

以下は、ロジャー先生添削前の英文です。

 

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M.T.さん 高3 (武蔵小杉校 所属)

 

TOPIC: In your opinion, are fully self-driving cars safe? Why or why not?

 

 

I think that fully self-driving cars are safer than cars driven by humans are. I have two reasons to support my opinion.

 

The first reason is that self-driving cars can follow all laws. People don’t always follow them. For example, there are people who drink and drive or who drive while using their smartphones. With self-driving cars, the number of the accidents which are happened by people who break the law will be smaller, though their actions are not permitted.

 

The second reason is that self-driving cars can see farther and gain more information. Human vision is limited, but the technology can make visions of them wider. The self-driving cars can also see front and back at the same time. By driving while paying attention to all directions, the number of accidents caused by carelessness will be smaller.

 

For these reasons, I think that self-driving cars are safer compared with cars driven by people.

 

ウィングローブ英語塾の高校生の英作文を紹介します!

 

ウィングローブには英作文添削サービスがありますが

添削してくれるのは、長く日本人大学生の英文添削をしてきたネイティブ・スタッフのロジャー先生。

 

複数回添削を受けると生徒はドンドン洗練された英文を書くようになってきます。

 

ロジャー先生がすばらしいライティングをした生徒を推薦してくれました。

ゾクゾクご紹介いたします。

 

(ちなみに、以下英文は、添削前の英文です)

 

H.O.さん(高1)開成高校  《ウィングローブ英語塾 大船富士見校》

 

➢ Do you think that humans will live on other planets in the future?

 

I don’t think humans will live on other planets in the future. First, it is so expensive for people to move to other planets. Currently, only a few rich people are able to go to space. Even if the technology develops and the cost becomes cheaper than now, it is difficult for all people to move to other planets.
Second, the environment on Earth is much easier to live in than the environment on other planets. Only the Earth has water, and the average temperature is 15 degrees Celsius. It is very suitable for us.
Therefore, I think humans will continue to live in the Earth in the future.

 

 

 

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