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ウィングローブ英語塾の高校生は、すばらしい英文を書いています。

第二弾、ご紹介します。

 

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今回は高3生の英文をご紹介します。

以下は、ロジャー先生添削前の英文です。

 

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M.T.さん 高3

 

TOPIC: In your opinion, are fully self-driving cars safe? Why or why not?

 

 

I think that fully self-driving cars are safer than cars driven by humans are. I have two reasons to support my opinion.

 

The first reason is that self-driving cars can follow all laws. People don’t always follow them. For example, there are people who drink and drive or who drive while using their smartphones. With self-driving cars, the number of the accidents which are happened by people who break the law will be smaller, though their actions are not permitted.

 

The second reason is that self-driving cars can see farther and gain more information. Human vision is limited, but the technology can make visions of them wider. The self-driving cars can also see front and back at the same time. By driving while paying attention to all directions, the number of accidents caused by carelessness will be smaller.

 

For these reasons, I think that self-driving cars are safer compared with cars driven by people.

 

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