ウィングローブ英語塾 高校生優秀英文エッセイご紹介 第二弾です。
阿佐ヶ谷校 Tさん（高３）の作文をご紹介いたします。
国立大学の試験問題の作文ですが、Second, 以下の英語、うまいなと思いました。
（なお、添削前の英文を掲載しております）
I view social media as a harmful thing. First, it can make you feel worse on a bad day. People only post their happy hours on it. Watching these posts, people could compare their life with others and envy them. Second, it can make you unsafe. The picture you posted can be examined by your followers and your private information might be known to others in unexpected ways. Social media can do harm with your mental health and safety.
