ウィングローブ英語塾 高校生 優秀英文エッセイ第４弾をお送りいたします。
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【TOPIC】 In my opinion, the Japanese government should legalize same-sex marriage.
I agree with Roy G. Bin (2015, paragraph 2), who said, “same-sex marriage is a civil right.” Civil rights are very important for Japanese people because the Constitution of Japan protects these rights. Also Japanese people and Japanese government are required to comply with it. Therefore, couples of the same sex should have the right to marry.
On the other hand, in Noah Rainbos’s 2014 article, the author said, “the vast majority of governments around the world do not allow couples of the same sex to marry.” Of course, some people may agree with this opinion. And this opinion has been well known for a long time. However, what it means is that these governments are depriving same-sex couples of rights which are protected by the Constitution of Japan.
For the reason mentioned above, I feel that the Japanese government should legalize same-sex marriage.
