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渋谷校 長嶺 沙羅さん（高３時）
トピック In the future, science may make it possible for people to live healthy life to the age of 150.
What would be the advantages and disadvantages of living longer?
I think that if we could live longer than now, we could spend more time with our family and friends, and we could also make more money with them. However, living longer has not only advantages but also disadvantages, because it causes many problems. For example, younger will be taxed more for elderly people’s pensions. And we will need more money to stay healthy.
Then, the gap between poor and rich will determine whether we can or can not live longer. I think that it is very cruel. From those things, I think that living longer has advantages and disadvantages, and both thing are very important.
