こんな英文が書ける! ウィングローブ生

ウィングローブでは在校生向けに
「ウィンコム」という英文ネイティブ添削サービスを行っておりますが、
最近、高校生のなかで定着しつつあります。

大学受験や英検にも必要ですが、
「書いて内容を伝えられる」ことは
「英語が使える」ということです。

以下は、添削後の英文ですが、
素晴らしい内容です。

トピック: Basic Income という考えをどう思うか

I am against the idea of basic income, for the following two reasons.

First, the idea of basic income itself is good, but it is not realistic. Introducing basic income would mean reorganizing the whole tax system. It would take too much time to gain the people's support.

Second, there is a possibility that basic income might contribute to financial difficulties or financial collapse. For example, France has a welfare system called Revenue de Solidarite Active (RSA). This system provides money to people on low incomes, on a means-tested basis, even if they don't have French nationality. Thanks to this generous system, unauthorized claims are rampant and it is a burden on the treasury. So, I would like to say that handouts from the government inevitably lead to people claiming benefits illegally.

For these reasons, I strongly believe that basic income should not be adopted.

(高田馬場校 高3生)

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